[ thankfully it's not a broken window... but even that would be better than what's going on right now. ]
Look, I-I know you probably got a lot goin' on right now, but I seriously don't know what to do. I literally tried every trick I could think of and zilch. Nada. I'm seriously stumped and I don't know who else would know 'bout this type'a stuff than you! Oh, and you have to promise — and I mean promise that you don't tell Asbel 'bout this unless we really, really need to!
[ because having Asbel panic over his little brother being comatose for no reason will just make the situation worse. regardless, at this point Pascal's rambling, which is something she'd only do in a fit of emotion: excitement, elation, or in this case, worry. please help her get to the point. ]
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Look, I-I know you probably got a lot goin' on right now, but I seriously don't know what to do. I literally tried every trick I could think of and zilch. Nada. I'm seriously stumped and I don't know who else would know 'bout this type'a stuff than you! Oh, and you have to promise — and I mean promise that you don't tell Asbel 'bout this unless we really, really need to!
[ because having Asbel panic over his little brother being comatose for no reason will just make the situation worse. regardless, at this point Pascal's rambling, which is something she'd only do in a fit of emotion: excitement, elation, or in this case, worry. please help her get to the point. ]